It’s no secret that you have to use attention getting words and phrases for hot selling copy.
I’m going to show you how easy it is. All you have to do is follow some simple rules.
Headlines Always Come First………Right?
Yes, in at least 2 ways.
One, always write the headline first. It sets the tone of the entire article and will be the first thing to influence a reader whether to go any further.
Two, It really does go first.
So, what do you need to write a truly great headline? There are several elements, but the first thing is color and drama. I mean, you really want to GRAB ATTENTION, and you’re not going to do that by writing a school essay.
Here’s an example. I was recently asked to set up a simple blog style website for a Bowls Club. The average age of the members was 66 years, but they thought they had to have a “succession” plan by trying to attract new members. Bowls has an “old” image so they had a conservative outlook.
At the same time they knew they had to modernize a little to appeal to new younger potential members.
The web site worked out pretty well for them (after some long discussions) and they were happy with it.
Then came time to write some material for posting out to houses in their local area. They wanted to do this by hand delivering leaflets to each house in the locality of Holland Park, about 5-6,000.
Here is what they had ready to go when they asked my opinion:
“Want to learn Bowls?
Then ring your local Club and discover how easy it is, and come along to a free lesson on Saturday 25 June 2009.
We will give you free tuition and you can enjoy a free BBQ after.
Ring xxxx xxxx to book.
See you here!”
Well it was what they had used in the past and it usually dragged in about 4 or 5 visitors.
I persuaded them to try one of these headlines:
How Would You Like Some Free Beer This Saturday?
Who Else Wants Free Beer?
You’re Invited To….
There’s Nothing Quite Like Your Own Local Club
Holland Park’s Best Kept Secret
It took a bit of convincing, but in the end they chose three to try out and after I added some more short copy, out they went.
Result? 23 new locals turned up on the day!
There are numerous resources to stimulate you. You can find them in the Resources Page.
I’ve used this example to demonstrate how a different approach can not only be more effective but more fun too!
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